Tuesday, 19 June 2018

Adrenalin Writing Reflection

Adrenalin writing is when we put ourselves in somebody's jeans and write what we think it would be like! For this one I was a squirrel with a hawk chasing me from tree to tree, flying everywhere. Our goal was to use lots of detail and put a picture in the reader's mind. I like adrenalin writing because you act as the person and your not writing about something in the past.
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  1. Anonymous25 June 2018 at 10:03

    Kia ora Charlie I like your Adrenalin piece it is really descriptive and I also enjoy your title because it is eye catching.

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    1. Charlie25 June 2018 at 10:08

      Thanks Hohepa
      I thought it was pretty good to

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