Monday 2 September 2019

Eels

Eel
Lurking, 
Waiting, 
Pouncing. 
Strong scent floats beneath the surface…
Venison! 
Ghostly live sticks, 
emerging from sheer darkness. 
The meat vanishes,
like a wolf pack,
picking of their prey. 
Dark shadows, 
murky waters,
beautiful fish!

Last week our class went down to the local river to study some eels. We saw about 4 big eels and we fed them venison and it was very fun. After the visit we wrote some poems about the eels.

2 comments:

  1. Hi charlie its Max from pompallier school. Your eel trip looks relay cool.
    We have eels in a river near our house that are quite big and we sometimes feed them. On your next trip you could try and measure a eel and we could compare the size.

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  2. hi charlie its me kade from pompallier primary school.i like you ell trip it looks cool and really fun some time i go eeling at my nan house

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