Tuesday, 5 May 2020
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An exciting story Charlie
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you had broken your writing into two parts and continued the saga of hunting this mighty boar! You have used excellent specific verbs to set the scene well and build the excitement of the chase e.g rampaging, nipping, break, bail
Your illustration of the Boar adds a great visual to your writing.
Well done
Mrs Bennett